New lane i want to branch out

[Tavon Martin]

I made this beat and song and i liked the idea i want to keep making music that sounds like you could chill listen to on the beach. I don't think there is a rapper like that lol. Tell me what you think! Thanks stay blessed

 

[kdanger]

im assuming thats a sample? sounds nice. this is good man props! i think the flow could be just a tiny bit tighter. cool topuic and the lyrics were tight man. keep it up brother! check me out!
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-about-addictionf4f-always-returned-476615/2/

 

[Major Scale]

Definitely got a chill vibe to it, some swing might add that bounce to make it super chill tho. Stay Frosty

 

[Tavon Martin]

Thanks alot for the feedback

 

[BassKitten]

I really like it! I think a bass should kick in at about 45 seconds in right after he says the n word, and follow the root note of the chords. That would really top the track off. The lyrics are really nice, I love it when rappers rap about something creative, not just drugs/*******/money. Great work!

Feed me?
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-feedback/chill-electro-track-f4f-3-a-476125/