new beat, feed returned

[dkelloway]

What do you think of this track? how can i improve it. What would you do to improve it? thanks

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=768548&songID=6302501

 

[B.Music]

Has a nice smooth sound to it. Pretty basic. But that snare doesn't fit...needs something crisper and louder and a sharper kick but that is just me. And add a variation to the drum pattern to mix up the beat a little bit

 

[ToNeZ]

this has a really old feel to it maynn although something that would come on fresh prince when it switched scenes lol but as for the actual beats its hot but the drums ent banging to mch and could change up a little, or maybe there spose to be low in the mix but nice stuff! review mine https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=238490 thanks!