New Banger!!! Grizzy!!! Some Inovative trap ish....All Feed Returned of Course.

itzdlo

itzdlo

ayodlo
Just uploaded a Wiz Khalifa type of trap beat. Tried to be a little different with it. I called it Grizzy. If you like it, Rate The Beat a 5 Star, I will GLADLY return the favor! The more detail/constructive criticism you give me, the more I will give you. Drop those links and ill get back at ya, thanks FP.

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I cant stand trap beats most of the time but this one really has some substance to it . I think that transition at 1:35 is kind of awkward though. and those 808s are kinda weak too. I love all the synth and pad work though.. got some really nice ambient sounds in there.. you got a good ear for those synths, there is so many weak ass sounding trap beat synths. Good work though.. Feeling this, very nice progression into the chorus too.. like i said though, the progressions from chorus to verse sound kinda weak.

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Real dope bro, love the changes you made in it. Mix sounds good, like others said, the 808s can knock just a little more, love the rims on there. I just got a couple questions. How do you make the 808s go from one note to another like at 1:01 and how do you filter the whole beat like you do at the intro? Been wondering that for a long time.
 
This beat is hard man! The 808's sound good on my sub mix in general sounded very good tho maybe the snare could use some more presence. But yea this bangs.
 
- Instrumentation is dark and simple -- love it
- I would cut off a little high end off the 808 or cut some frequency of the 808 because it muffles the mix a bit
- I would increse the higher frequency on the snare alittle to give it more snap and to make it stand out more
- Other than that the mix is on point
- Arrangement is on point
- The switch up between parts is awesome

Keep it up man

Please return the favour:

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ced-benny-liang-all-feedback-returned-415295/

Thanks!
 
yo man this beat is ill, i dont like trap beats but this is dope, the verses are different then the chorus, which is dope its not repetitive. The 808s could hit a little more, but i like this dude, and i can totally see wiz on this, cuz its more ambient then trap. I really like your synth work alot.
 
Dark sounding. I like it, and i think witht he right person Wiz would do just fine on this beat. Everything probably could knock a little more, so maybe just work on the mix one more time. besides that, it bangs.
 
This track is awesome man. Personally I would shorten the length of the bass. The snares are nice and they pop, and the drum rolls are really good. Everything was mixed pretty well and everything sounds balanced. Great job man, just a question, how do you space out a mix like this beat?

Please check out my new track/remix, I'd gladly appreciate some constructive criticism.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...emix-f4f-100%-guaranteed-415460/#post49459063

Thanks. :)
 
Thanks for the feedback everyone. Im going to try to make the clap and the 808 knock a little more clean.
 
I love when those brass hits come in, really makes it go that much harder. Those 808 hits could have a bit more resonance to really make subs rattle. Sounds good overall though and i can definitely hear a rapper fit on this perfectly.

Give my new track in my signature a listen if you like.
 
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