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[Qsongz77]

I am trying to develop a new sound tell me what do you think about this???


http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?q=hi&songID=10301064

---------- Post added 02-20-2011 at 06:12 AM ---------- Previous post was 02-19-2011 at 06:08 PM ----------

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[ElyOne]

i think the whole song needs to be mixt and masterd better but other than that it sounds alright to me keep workin on playing on these keys .)

https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=359403

 

[quantumleap]

i like everything in this beat...synths are nice, keys are nice...drums are good...got a couple effects here and there that fit...mix isnt too great at all tho...thats about it...if this was mixed better, it'd sound alot better...still not bad tho..keep at it~!

 

[PtownJungle]

i like everything in this beat...synths are nice, keys are nice...drums are good...got a couple effects here and there that fit...mix isnt too great at all tho...thats about it...if this was mixed better, it'd sound alot better...still not bad tho..keep at it~!

I agree with what he said.. only thing is when the drums first kick in. the keys sound somewhat repetitive to me. Again I think if you spend some time mixing it it will sound awesome. Its a good sound.

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[mdp0402]

hey man this is pretty dope, i like the melody and how it drops, well done!

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http://futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=359041

 

[KidCrateDigger]

Doesn't fit in my ear.. Piano is a lil bit too loud, that saw synth doesnt fit in, bassline sounds weird and drums ain't nothin special either..

https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=359093

 

[jrbeats5]

This shit is ****ing dope bro. Professional sounding music. I Like the chords and the melodies on the piano. I would work on the drum sounds and pattern tho
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[pgathriller]

piano is bomb but could use some more passing notes to help it glide along, and maybe let off the reverb a little; synthwork is dope, drums are nice and simple. great abstract relaxed style, could see someone like Cudi on this one for sure!

 

[W.A.I.S. Krew]

im feeling the piano, not so much the bass, overall it is a cool track tho. i love the synth, just keep working on the mix like others said and get you a vocalist.

https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=359707

 

[Qsongz77]

This shit is ****ing dope bro. Professional sounding music. I Like the chords and the melodies on the piano. I would work on the drum sounds and pattern tho
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[lospro05]

This is cool, the only thing i had a problem with was the bass line for some reason it didn't seem to mesh well. Besides that pianos were great and track structure was nice.

Can You Leave Me Feed On This: https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=359694

 

[Qsongz77]

thanx ya'll

 

[Drgoo]

yeah, this is ok. the keys are chill, but the mix is a bit mehh.
https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=359840

 

[Wedges2]

I'm not feelin the drums at all really. I feel like they could just be much better if you start from scratch on those. Drums kinda like that Chris Brown song produced by Tha Business. Other than that the transitions could be a lil better. Like in the intro when the beat drops it really feels like it needs somethin there.

Generally tho I like the beat.
Hit me back? https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?p=49067467#post49067467

 

[DashofRockBottom]

"Experimental Type" - would have to say there are a few chords that i do like... and then some thati could care less about... and the kit is a lil weak... i think what could fill this track up would be percussion... listen to some of your fav R&B records and get ideas...

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https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?p=49067987#post49067987

 

[Qsongz77]

thanks y'all

 

[10fingaz]

I'd do more to the piano melody, the progression is decent....just needs more notes in between to make it flow more and sound less robotic.
ALso the lower end of your mix sounds muddy , gotta fix that, decent track