Stanzah
New member
'and Pizza' lol.
Good work. Lyrics are fine. Flow is good. I think you just need to get used to recording abit more and find your voice/delivery, theres just that slight bit of personality missing in your vocals. Try to deliver with abit more conviction, this will make your bars sound more believable too. No disrespect, just tryna help. PM me if you need a better explanation.
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Good work. Lyrics are fine. Flow is good. I think you just need to get used to recording abit more and find your voice/delivery, theres just that slight bit of personality missing in your vocals. Try to deliver with abit more conviction, this will make your bars sound more believable too. No disrespect, just tryna help. PM me if you need a better explanation.
Return it:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ve-feedback/wannabe-feedback-returned-477582/