Full Song:Be With Me (c)Rida 2011. F4F

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Rida2

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Hey guys, My new Full Song "Be With Me" is finally finished. Feed for feed guarenteed. Be nice if you could comment on:1. The song (lyricsand tune),2.Production, 3. Would the song sell like it is? If you were to buy it what changes would you like to see? Thanks guys.If you like it, then give it a boost on you tube Here's the link: Be With Me Final C avi - YouTube
 
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Okay here's my two cents. The beat is good. Not too much not too little. Catchy. The vocals however are not for me. It's just not my type of music. But overall this sounds like a pretty solid production and I'm sure you would get some sales. I can't tell you what I would want changed if I bought because simply, I wouldn't buy it. But remember this isn't the type of music I listen to. Keep it up fam.

Return feed please? https://www.futureproducers.com/for...es-hard-deserves-full-listen-trust-me-396095/

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Thank s a lot Hitman

Thanks a lot hitman, Glad you liked it. I posted a feed for you.
 
Hey this is the confused dude it sounds like your a dj I like wut u did but it sounds like ushers song still I sync acapellas to my beats wut u did sounded like kareoky with effects
 
I.m so glad you think so , but it's all my hard work for the last 8 months. I appreciate it.
 
First, I'm not a specialist of this music genre.
1) Vocals are great except the speaker's voice which is boomy.
2) It sounds like a gigantic intro. I was expecting some serious beat to arrive, but it never arrived. It makes the whole track too linear by missing of dynamic movement. If you don't want to use a complete drum section, maybe the claps can do the "re-lauching" job?
3) I only buy world music and live tickets for the rest.
 
thanks Laurend, thanks Mr midnight. Between you both I guess I'm right down the middle-but I will consider it. Um- speaker(narrator) voice will be automated later. - Much appreciated.
 
Wow sounds really professional!
Ok think you are professional ;D
Maybe i think the song is too "fordable" (hope you know what i mean), but its still very good !
 
Listened to your track. The main lead melody is good in the beat and so is the main lead vocal melody in the hook. The mix needs a lot of work. Try adding a layer to the kick so the listener can hear it. If someone's listening to this track on an ipod, most likely they'll never hear the kick and that's a big part of this club track. The singing needs work too... Hope you take this constructive criticism to improve your track and future tracks! If you want more feedback for the track, you can msg me.

- the BIG shots
 
Reminded me of Yeah by Usher. Haha I think it sounds like an intro like someone else mentioned earlier. Other than that, not bad at all I like it. I wouldn't take it to a club yet though :)
 
This song sounds very weird, the vocals and that synth line seem too loud, wheres the drums? Lol the singing is not great but it does sound catchy, sounds like theres too much reverb on the vocals. This really reminds me of that Bobby Light song lol. I was ready for a nice steady drum beat to come in but it never did. Overall nice job of conveying a heavy feel to the track though. Nice job.

Check me out, thanks.
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-feedback/strip-club-r-b-banger-*f4f*-396398/
 
Thanks Tiso,Big Shots, Pshar Prodtns , Dirty Third Beats. I appreciate your comments. Tiso not sure what is meant by "fordable".
 
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Need some more structure. The drums need to be more prominent so you can follow along the melodies and spec the singing. Honestly, just brining up the drums would be a major improvement.
 
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