Soundtrack for a drama

[BrainClaim]

Good evening!


My first successful soundtrack has been used for our theatre play. My friends liked it but I would also like to hear feedbacks from You, the musicians.

(Genre of play: tragicomedy)

 

[dubwell]

For a second I thought you ripped of paradise by cold-play, but then the melody changed

Very pretty. Only suggestion I have is the guitar synth sounds very robotic and unnatural. This can be fixed with using Kontakt or just by taking the time to adjust the velocity of the notes 1 by 1 to make it more human. That is a small gripe though. Maybe try adding some reverb to the track as a whole. Not much, but a little to make it bigger. I also love the glitchy bass thing you got going on underneath, but if you could - try to make it a bit bass like my adding more of a low end.

Great melodies and chords, keep it up.

I need help on my track too, if you can help I would be so happy!

 

[BrainClaim]

Thanks so much for the feedback! I will definitely consider Your points!