LAST OF US | Style Soundtrack

[DJOzmanMJ]

Hi there,

Just dropping this as I worked my way around the first draft of a second of mine I remade today.

So, here's the link: Chapter 2 by Tinem | Tinem Beatz | Free Listening on SoundCloud

Share your thoughts if you want, it'll be appreciated.

[Celestial Aeon]

You have some good ideas, but it sounds a bit too "random" and empty to my ears. The orchestral elements feel a bit out of place together with the guitar. But refreshing take, takes courage to try something not too common, props for that

[DJOzmanMJ]

First of all, thanks for the criticism
Second, I know what you meant with the emptiness and randomness of the elements. I had a problem introducing the strings as the track already began with the guitar and would make the strings sound "jumpy" and "out of nowhere". I might change the track entirely since I'm pretty much struck right now with this version. However, I made another version of the same track, but a dance version which can be found here: Chapter 3 (Latin/Tropical House) by Tinem | Tinem Beatz | Free Listening on SoundCloud

Again, thanks for your comment