F4F!! Need feedback on this beat I added to!

[purpribb]

Let me know what you guys think! And the original version that I edited is on my soundcloud if you want to hear the differences. I appreciate all the feedback, please continue to help me improve my work!



LISTEN TO WITH HEADPHONES!

And as always, F4F!

 

[TBProductions]

Nice pan on the percs, definitely different.. i like how you kept building and building. not my style but cool.. should add a lead or something to give it that full sound. nice work F4F ?https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ason-chinatown-hoes-what-ya-think-f4f-477275/

 

[Yungspazz]

The build to this was dope, good work!

Feedback? https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ilner-x-jb-x-around-feedback-feedback-477382/

 

[Deezel]

I was going to check out this track, but it says it's not available. If you check out my track v and repost a link I will check back again.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...feedback/worst-beat-you-ever-did-hear-477379/

 

[LottoTracks]

nice job with the pan fx, and the build up is very cool. solid work on the drums & bass as well, i think you should add a lead to it & it'll be even better. good work tho, keep it up

 

[ManuForti]

Liking this perc loop although it is a nice hook for the song i think it you could add more to it change it up a little here and there double up and remove it at certain periods 4 bars 8 bars 16 bars ya get me? Bass sounds ok nice and deep but could do with layering as it is low in volume and depth id try splitting the bass into 3 seperate racks 1 . mono low end sub 2 . mono mid/ low end bass 3 . mid / high stereo for some intrest. Its nice work youve got here i think it stands well on its own and doesnt need anything else added just use what you already have and make variations.

 

[SpiffyAvacados]

I didn't dig the clicks and clocks as the main melody but with how much you switched up the secondary melody made it really nice and blended with them really well. The kick sounded a bit funky but the hi hats are on point, as well as that 808. Check out a last day of school/summer song I made
https://soundcloud.com/cole_mercutio/desert-arithmetic-prod-thejasom

 

[timetravtoaster]

Greetings.

I like the percussion work here. This has a ambient feel. The engineering in this is fine, I think that perhaps a artist or a lead will liven this vp. Keep it going.


Please return the feedback here: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ack/lanquiditly-love-|-boom-bap-|-f4f-477440/

- TTT

 

[HeavyTakeMusic]

love the percs and drums on this. the arrangement is cool. a dope ass rapper can tears this beat up. left you more comments on soundcloud.

 

[Deezel]

Sorry for the late reply. Been busy with stuff. Anyways, I like it. I like the percussion work you got going on in here. Would maybe like to hear another instrument in here, but it's cool how it is now.