[F4F] "Awake" - Sad Chill Dreamy Beat [Feedback Returned 100%]

Check out my latest track and let me know what you think. Make sure you post a link to your stuff so I can return the feedback.

https://soundcloud.com/brandonbarlow/awake

Very dreamy track you got going on here. I like it, it's like eerily calm. Reminds me of something Kastle would make [look him up, he's good with chill beats like these.]

The pad is dope. The beat, imo, could be beefed up just a tad bit. Other than that.. really good work. I can hear someone rapping or crying on this track. [By crying I mean singing]

Good work man!
 
Very dreamy track you got going on here. I like it, it's like eerily calm. Reminds me of something Kastle would make [look him up, he's good with chill beats like these.]

The pad is dope. The beat, imo, could be beefed up just a tad bit. Other than that.. really good work. I can hear someone rapping or crying on this track. [By crying I mean singing]

Good work man!

Thanks for the feedback dude hahaha.
 
This one sounds pretty nice and I like this atmosphere thing right here! It is really calming and chilly but sounds unfinished. The kick drums needs to hit a bit harder, the snare rolls are pretty dope there. Some more little elements would beef it up.
 
Good morning. I just woke up from a dream and this is good to listen to.
not sure where you was trying to go with it tho.
 
This one sounds pretty nice and I like this atmosphere thing right here! It is really calming and chilly but sounds unfinished. The kick drums needs to hit a bit harder, the snare rolls are pretty dope there. Some more little elements would beef it up.

Thanks for listening man and thanks for the feedback.

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it is sad but i like it... deff would sound good with somone singing ..... maybe if u added a variation in the drums it might bring a new elelment to part of the song.... but overall pretty good work

https://www.futureproducers.com/for.../need-feedback-let-me-know-f4f-always-458280/


nice atmosphere here...i like the slow feel...mix sounds clean...i like the drums...i think it needs a bit more...sounds unfinished...nice work, keep grinding.

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Thanks for the feedback guys. I returned the favor on your threads.
 
Okay I'm finally home and able to hear your sample so here it goes! You have a very good understanding of how to make beautiful sounds. All of the elements of your track are perfectly master and your track does an amazing job of setting a certain mood. However your track gets a little boring to listen to after a while. Theres no major changes throughout the track, its the same snare hats and ambient noise throughout the whole track. Theres no loss or gain of energy anywhere in the track and no matter how beautiful you can make the sounds I'm going to lose interest if you don't give me a reason to listen. Try to change up the track a little bit, add some more variation besides moving the snares and hats around. Give people a reason to keep listening!

And just posting this again here is my track, make sure to stop by and leave me some feedback!
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ive-receive-feedback/sweat-sample-f4f-458418/
 
Okay I'm finally home and able to hear your sample so here it goes! You have a very good understanding of how to make beautiful sounds. All of the elements of your track are perfectly master and your track does an amazing job of setting a certain mood. However your track gets a little boring to listen to after a while. Theres no major changes throughout the track, its the same snare hats and ambient noise throughout the whole track. Theres no loss or gain of energy anywhere in the track and no matter how beautiful you can make the sounds I'm going to lose interest if you don't give me a reason to listen. Try to change up the track a little bit, add some more variation besides moving the snares and hats around. Give people a reason to keep listening!

And just posting this again here is my track, make sure to stop by and leave me some feedback!
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ive-receive-feedback/sweat-sample-f4f-458418/

Thanks for the feedback man. I'll keep that in mind. I returned the feedback on your thread.
 
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