Vocal deep house

[vangerdavid]

Hey everyone so this is fresh off a label rejection so looking for some feedback to improve

Let me know what you guys think! I struggled with the pianos, revised it, and hope it sounds OK now.

https://soundcloud.com/resdev/research-development-losing

 

[Precursormusic]

Hi Research & Development,

The song sounds pretty good to me, maybe they declined it for style..
If I could change anything I would try and bring down the vocals a bit and widen them. This way they aren't too loud but still fill out the song.
Some of the vocals seem to be a liiiitle bit out of tune, that should be an easy fix.

I like the bass stab thingy, it makes it very catchy. Kick could go with some strenght in the lower frequencies. Hats could go with some panning.

Overall really nice song

Hope that helps!

Cheers,
Precursor

 

[bchander]

The piano sound great. I think that you could EQ the vocals a little bit. Overall great work!
Return the favor with feedback on my track! https://soundcloud.com/bchander1/freaks-up-against-the-wall-1
Thanks in advance.

 

[HighSpace]

I guess it didn't catch their attention which is why u got rejected.

Something feels different about the vocals, (I never worked with vocals so I can't tell u the technical fix to make) but it feels isolated. I really like the background vocal. The drums work for me as well. Overall good track, very few elements and it works together nicely.

 

[isurvive]

Hey everyone so this is fresh off a label rejection so looking for some feedback to improve

Let me know what you guys think! I struggled with the pianos, revised it, and hope it sounds OK now.

https://soundcloud.com/resdev/research-development-losing

It needs more bass frequincy, sounds little bit less. Over all quite enjoyable deephouse. I can play that on a cafe or pub.

 

[Jackdamnielz]

I would try and get the vocals to be more harmonic with the track itself.

But to me the track really sounds good.