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    Sooth Me Under The Pool, NEED SOME OF THAT CRITICISM Y'ALL

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    Hey everyone!

    I'm working on this chill lo fi ish song right now, and I want to see what others think of it right now!

    Here's some thoughts I have:
    I personally think the snare is aaaaalmost what I'd like, what would you change about it?
    The middle part between the two drum parts needs spicing up.
    I haven't really started doing mixing yet, what frequencies or instruments need adjusting?

    Here's the track!
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    Thanks everyone!

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    I like that vibe you are going for and the instruments are neat.
    However, I have to point out that the lows were not on point, the kick and snare didn't interact very well with the instrument, and I advice you change the snare and the kick, and definitely make the bass and lead more present in the mix. Hope that helps.

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    Hey man this is really nice! Love the atmosphere of the synths and the chord progression. I think the snare sits a bit off in the mix because my attention goes directly to that when it comes in. The sample might be okay but just needs some more hit to it I think, but its hard to say exactly. Best would be to find a good lofi reference track that has a nice snare and try to match that.

    Really like the vibe overall.

    Great work!
    OAKUM

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