Sooth Me Under The Pool, NEED SOME OF THAT CRITICISM Y'ALL

[ProdByAaronP]

Hey everyone!

I'm working on this chill lo fi ish song right now, and I want to see what others think of it right now!

Here's some thoughts I have:
I personally think the snare is aaaaalmost what I'd like, what would you change about it?
The middle part between the two drum parts needs spicing up.
I haven't really started doing mixing yet, what frequencies or instruments need adjusting?

Here's the track!
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Thanks everyone!

 

[Jamax]

I like that vibe you are going for and the instruments are neat.
However, I have to point out that the lows were not on point, the kick and snare didn't interact very well with the instrument, and I advice you change the snare and the kick, and definitely make the bass and lead more present in the mix. Hope that helps.

 

[OAKUM]

Hey man this is really nice! Love the atmosphere of the synths and the chord progression. I think the snare sits a bit off in the mix because my attention goes directly to that when it comes in. The sample might be okay but just needs some more hit to it I think, but its hard to say exactly. Best would be to find a good lofi reference track that has a nice snare and try to match that.

Really like the vibe overall.

Great work!
OAKUM