erfanadeshi
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Hey to y'all Great Producers
Could ya Give me some feedback on my preview?
thanks
Could ya Give me some feedback on my preview?
thanks
Some FeedBack Would Be appreciated
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GoldenGirl
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Nice, Erfan! Only 17, and doing this? well done. try to work on how the sounds go together, both melodically and rhythmically. Some of the sounds crash a bit. Good luck!
erfanadeshi
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The beginning needs something to grab my attention. You have a great foundation, a strong one no doubt. But something is missing such as great and catchy lead during the transition between the beat and the down time between THAT beat and the drop. This track sounds so good but it still needs a bit work. Especially what Goldengirl said, sounds are clashing but if that is sort out man I feel like this can be big! Keep it up!
Some of the keys sound out of key. The keys are off beat. Buildup is good. Drop is good.
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