Solid idea, needs to be fleshed out

[xxcalicoxx]

I made this track super quickly and I was absolutely in love with the melody. I know a lot needs to be done, I actually made a second version of it that's on my soundcloud but I didn't care for it much, any feedback welcome!

Milky Way (Prod. Calico) by Calico | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[ST4N]

hey there, returning feedback

I think the piano there is slightly compressed, let it breathe a bit Musically it's nice, really, I like the positive vibes

the thing around 0:30 and 1:25 feels somewhat off-key

the melody that comes in 0:55 is indeed very good, so keep on working, it definitely has potential