Second track would love some feedback

[KinglySafe]

Hey this is the secnond song i've made.
There's some vocals in, that i've found on looperman, and it's chopped up in some of the song.
Ive also tried to put some dubstep elements in it.
I really liked how it turned out.
I would love some feedback.

KinglySafe - Fly Away ft. stranger¿

 

[Yellit]

Hey dude nice work on making the track.

Some initial feedback - try EQing out some of the clashing frequencies from the lead and the vocals, so the vocals come through a bit cleaner. You can also volume duck 1 or 2db or side-chain it to the vocals.. play around and see what you like better. I found the elements were all up-front of the mix which gives it an almost 2D feel. Try panning, EQing, managing the gain of tracks, adding chorus or delays etc these can help create depth and perception of complexity in the mix. Maybe you want a couple of elements to be the drivers of the track, so focus on those being prominent, and other elements in there to support them.

Good stuff mate - keep it up!