New tracks, would like some feedback

[Jawima]

I recently made 2 new tracks and would love if you could spare some time to listen and give me some feedback... Im not very experienced when it comes to mixing and mastering so if you hear something thats totally too loud or silent etc, please let me know how I could fix these problems

 

[Waffle Music]

Wow
This song is defiantly great. I don't have much to add except the piano at 0:37 sounds alittle bit to small to me. Try adding reverb (which I think you did) or having more layers to your chords. I believe the melody is layers above chords but would be nice is if the melody were chords. Other than that minor grip I think this song I great and that if you keep developing it can become wonderful.
Can't wait to see what you have to offer.

 

[Jawima]

Thank you for your response I think you are right about the piano, it sounds a little bit too small now when I think about it... Yeah I've got alot of ideas and tracks that are work in progress so stay tuned for more