I comment as I'm listening.
Effect kick/crash a bit overused, so is the piano. The complextro intro is amazingly handled even if I think the voice doesn't fit really well and that's it felt like already heard. A housy kick or/and a snare is missing in the drop. The end is a bit random isn't it?
Really nice technique, I'm sorry but I'm not really into that kind of tunes. Ocean breeze is way better!
Have a nice day!