New dance/pop instrumental made

[adge2013]

Hey guys this is only the 3rd song i've made.. I started producing music just under a year ago.

I know i've got a long way to go but if you guys could give me any helpful tints or hints it would be greatly appreciated.

https:// soundcloud.com/adgey04/wandering-eye

Constructive feedback (even if it's not your type of music)

Thank you,

Aaron

 

[timetravtoaster]

Greetings.



I like the arrangement, and I like the vibe during the breaks. The engineering is decent, though I think that kick could have more depth as well as the overall soundscape. I also would say try working on layering your synths.


Please return the feedback on track #2 here: https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/production-techniques/showcase-your-music-give-receive-feedback/my-mind-blowing-debut-ep-color-spacesound-turbulence-%7C-free-download-445737/?highlight=


- TTT

 

[adge2013]

<The engineering is decent, though I think that kick could have more depth as well as the overall soundscape. I also would say try working on layering your synths.>

Thanks for taking the time to listen... i'm going to listen to yours later day and i will give you my opinion.

What do you mean by layering the synths? You mean just repeating them on a different track, to make them thicker?

 

[MrSloth]

The synth sounds way too overpowering for me. Otherwise not bad for a 3rd song.

https://soundcloud.com/theamazingslothman