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    New dance/pop instrumental made

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    Hey guys this is only the 3rd song i've made.. I started producing music just under a year ago.

    I know i've got a long way to go but if you guys could give me any helpful tints or hints it would be greatly appreciated.

    https:// soundcloud.com/adgey04/wandering-eye

    Constructive feedback (even if it's not your type of music)

    Thank you,

    Aaron

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    Greetings.



    I like the arrangement, and I like the vibe during the breaks. The engineering is decent, though I think that kick could have more depth as well as the overall soundscape. I also would say try working on layering your synths.


    Please return the feedback on track #2 here: https://www.futureproducers.com/foru...37/?highlight=


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    <The engineering is decent, though I think that kick could have more depth as well as the overall soundscape. I also would say try working on layering your synths.>

    Thanks for taking the time to listen... i'm going to listen to yours later day and i will give you my opinion.

    What do you mean by layering the synths? You mean just repeating them on a different track, to make them thicker?



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    The synth sounds way too overpowering for me. Otherwise not bad for a 3rd song.

    https://soundcloud.com/theamazingslothman

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