Nice idea, some cool note selections and stuff here and there. This has nothing to do with techno though.
I think you need some mixing lessons, but as a musical it's great, progressive type trance. The drums are a bit drained out, needs more energy.
Somewhere after 3.30 when that saw type sound comes in, it gets really messy and unclear, everything is out of balance and instruments fight for space but also the quality of the overall sound is a bit bad there or simply not processed properly.
I don't mean to be rude, you did well. But I assume you don't know much about processing stuff and mixing. It could help you a lot to make your bright ideas better and wider in a good balanced way.