Quite short! A full version soon?
Anyway, good stuff, maybe the kick is a bit "flat" not heavy enough but other than that I like the work you did on the drums overall.
What do you mean? Is this the first music you ever made? No, it can not be, this sounds really good. But I guess you didn't mean it when you said " first track uploaded to soundcloud"... For how many years you make music?
Please feedback:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-lovely-bullet-edm-2018-a-549544/post50102679
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Nice synths and bass, I also really like the drum rythm. I do want to suggest you pitch the kick a bit more down and give it more on the low end frequencies. The theme of the song suggest a heavier kick than you are using right now. Ableton has some very easy audio filters to enhance kick drums. Just play around with the EQ 8 and Auto filter. Should be an easy start for getting into more advanced kick drums.
Good luck on your next project!