house disco funk track let me know what you guys think f4f

[alrightythen]

 

[djdazznj]

I like this a lot. My only issue is with the 'plucked' instruments themselves; the bass and the guitar (I'm assuming that's a guitar patch that comes in later). They sound inorganic, for lack of a better term. But I like their arrangement. Good stuff!

 

[Valken]

Wow, this is funky! Honestly, I couldn't find any flaw with this track other than some personal preferences I would've added. A tighter hat and a bit more interesting sounds, it sounded a bit repetitive for my taste. But, other than that, nice track!

Would you be so kind to review mine, thanks in advance:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...dance/hardstyle-valken-great-dictator-512060/

 

[alrightythen]

thanks for the feedback, yeah thats the only bass and guitar i can work with dont have real ones so just wrote it all in midi. probably re work it today add more stuff change it up a bit.

 

[hotelsweetmusic]

SEINFELD! Haha jk but it did remind me of the theme song. Just because your hi-hat and snare are so high-pitched already, what if you took the top end off your kick and just focused on the bass part of it? I think there is a little too much going on in the high end, especially with the hat being a little too open like Valken pointed out. And things feel weird when you take the hi-hat out for a bit because of how open and dominant it is. Ok I'll shut up about the hi-hat now. The different synths you use keep it very interesting. Instead of reusing 1 you have like 3 or more playing different mini-patterns. I think the arrangement is appropriate as well. Good track, man!

Can you give me feedback? Headhunterz - To Be Me (Hotel Sweet Remix)

 

[Kolendo]

You've got some nice elements happening in these, I would suggest using more filters to soften out some sounds and create more depth. Very lovely melodies though, remind me of chiptunes a bit!