Hello future house producers,, feedback?

[Deveen]

My track:
Feedback by Deveen | Free Listening on SoundCloud

I will try my best to give everyone feedback aswell

 

[Gre!g]

I think the chorus is great, there is some dissonance ,is it intentional ?

 

[Deveen]

W

 

[Deveen]

What do you mean by dissonance?, if you are talking about the top lead for the chorus. haven't found a melody that fits the chorus

 

[Gre!g]

Yes that's it

 

[minorkey]

I really like it man the drop is great especially those drums sound really good just should be longer

 

[VBeats]

Nice Start i like it.
Specialy the intro and the drop melody!
Im Curious to the final result!

 

[Linas]

I like it mate! Really makes a mate moving!
Though, in my opinion - experiment more with bass. It's really dull, simple and too ordinary. You got the leads and drums standing out - that's the main part! Now all you need with this track is just.. add another bass layer, eq it so it fits with the other one, make it stand out, maybe distort a little

 

[Deveen]

really appreciat the feedback!

 

[Lematron]

good melody

 

[dave30814]

I like It

Davide