[Future House] Tristan Carmichael - Wild one

[Tristan Carmichael]

Hey guys

I have a new track I'm working on and would really LOVE some feedback on it.

I'm trying to do more club/dance kind of tracks that are a bit harder to what I normally release. What's also very new to me, is that I've tried to create it without a lead vocal leading it. haha I actually just sang a simple phrase and pitched it down just to add something to the track.

How does it sound both mix, master and of course does the track make you wanna dance haha

Any help and guidance would be simply awesome! (soundcloud link is the track)

https://soundcloud.com/tristan-carmi...edback/s-5tDOM

 

[coltfrog]

Don't have any advice for you cause I've only been producing for a few months, but I loved the track man.. whole thing was a banger.

 

[Aung Myat Paing]

Wow! such a dope track i love it ?! Subscribed u on Soundcloud just now.

 

[MandyBlue]

Very nice track, very catchy. I'm not sure I liked the lead vocal that much, maybe you could add some more variations to it, or record more phrases. But the beat really makes me wanna dance haha nice job man

 

[Ensenth]

From my perspective, this track represents good starting point. But, it is too short. You are straight jumping "to the point". I can see no tension here. When you make club music you have to keep in mind that sort of music is made for a DJ and mixing, and you have to tell a story. But, in general idea is good.

 

[Aung Myat Paing]

Download link please ! The more i listen to it , the more i love it ^_^

 

[Glitch1044]

Good stuff man! The mixing/mastering sounds spot on to me. Very clear mix. Really cool track dude!

Christina Novelli - Hiding My Heart (Avyde Remix) by Avyde | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[Profound Wav's]

Hey there, nice track! im experimenting diffirent styles, maybe something more commercial would be good for my progress, so thanks for inspiration

 

[Tristan Carmichael]

I agree that's it too short. I'll probably lengthen it a bit. I also slowed it down a tad. Felt it was rushing a bit.
Thanks for the tip!

From my perspective, this track represents good starting point. But, it is too short. You are straight jumping "to the point". I can see no tension here. When you make club music you have to keep in mind that sort of music is made for a DJ and mixing, and you have to tell a story. But, in general idea is good.

 

[Tristan Carmichael]

Going to finish it stick it on souncloud Will add a download link

Tristan Carmichael | Free Listening on SoundCloud

Download link please ! The more i listen to it , the more i love it ^_^

 

[Kruminsh]

Pretty nice track man, like the future house drop, and vocals.

 

[LynxLove]

nice punchy bassy beat. Just don't think it's terribly unique, but it works and sounds good.

 

[Mea Thrills]

Vocal needs a better mixing imo.

 

[Tristan Carmichael]

Thanks man, yeah I actually hate the vocals the more I listen. Probably going to change them and slow the speed down 2-3bmp

Shot for the feedback!

Vocal needs a better mixing imo.

 

[stylist]

It Sounds Really Awesome... Keep It Up You Are Going The Right Way ..