The first track

[Santis]

Hey,

it is my first so track, so i need help and constructive critics.
Will help me see if I am making any mistakes and possibly how can I fix it

Śanti - Share With Me by Śanti | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[Santis]

Nobody?

 

[NothingNowhereNobody]

Nothing stands out to me problem-wise. It's a very happy piece, very easy to move to.

These forums are funny. You will get 70 looks at your post, but none of them listen to your music, let alone comment on it. I suspect data scraping is happening more than anything else. Probably more bots looking at these forums than people.

 

[The Sound Of Now]

I think it's good mixing wise. Reminds me of artist skrux