Feedback on Progressive House Track

[AudibleCrunch]

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Needing all feedback on this newest track, please tell me what you think of it and how I can improve future tracks.

All replies appreciated and be very honest

Thanks

 

[ASLIN]

I like the supersaw synth and a good white noise filling out the spectrum.

Good variations aswell, doesn't get boring. The major thing if I can be completely honest, is that the main melody and bassline is out of tune, the bassline notes just doesn't work with the main synth melody in my opinion.
It sounds like the first note of the synth is B and the first bass note is F#, try either changing the keynote of you're bassline or synth in order to create a better harmony​

Other then that, I like the arrangement and variations of the track. That's really good.
Keep it up and keep on improving my friend!!

 

[NathanBright]

a youtube or soundlcloud link would be great, cos we can just click click and listen rather than having to download ;P