Do the Vocals match with the Melody?

[Glitch1044]

Need some help for a remix I'm working on. I'm pretty sure I'm not off chord, but I was wondering what you guys/gals think? Does the melody work with the vocals??


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[DJMSherman]

Maybe slower bpm...would give it a more vocal based tune instead of your instrumenta... .its sounds good ....thoug.....but I dunno...