Hey man, this track has great potential. Here are my personal recommendations on making it better.
1. The drum loop never really changes throughout the song. That bored me out, as I was expecting some progressions in it.
2. The percussion sound that comes in during the break is a nice addition, but its dynamics are clouded by the vocals in the background, which makes the track sound messy and unmixed.
3. Overall, the track lacks originality, progression, and flavor. The clap and the kick sounds are heard everywhere. Try out something new and different. Play around with different filters and other sound manipulators. Don't be afraid to use automations.
Thanks for the great track, I enjoyed listening to it!