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[Jamax]

18 by Jaydex | Free Listening on SoundCloud
I just need some honest opinion and advice on this (baby) and hope you like it!

 

[madfren]

It has a happy feeling to it and the sounds and mix is good imo. You can probably make this song short and sweet but I think you need to work on some build up and slower section in the middle.

 

[Megasmall]

It is very commercial and happy. This would sell to users making a commercial or other video work.

 

[Grounder_music]

Really liked the second part! Id make that the main focus of the track imo keep it up!

 

[Chop45's]

I like this too and followed!

 

[Dirty32]

Nice debut! Too bad we don't have the whole song on display!
Anyway, it seems to be technically well on point and the vibe is sunny, it feels good.
No negative critics for this, don't hesitate to come to my latest to help me out : I'm Alive by Chris Van Gills | Free Listening on SoundCloud