Smashmello
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Hey, I'd love some feedback on my new song Karaka 
[Big Room] Smashmello - Karaka (Original Mix) [F4F]
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planetsouth
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yes, good sounds mate
Smashmello
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Thanks!
officialdysfunction
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I like your breakdowns! Cool sounds.
But I would work on the drops, more structure and less different melodies.
Check out mine if you want: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ent-trance-house-dance/rocketfire-f4f-484252/
But I would work on the drops, more structure and less different melodies.
Check out mine if you want: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ent-trance-house-dance/rocketfire-f4f-484252/
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Slastimil
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So fat sound! I really enjoy this track. Very progressive and makes me wanna dance. I especially love the celtic -like motives.
Just little thing - I would change the pre delay on the clap at the beginning. The mix as a whole is big and spacey and the echo on the clap makes the clap sound like it is in small room and that contras the rest of the mix. It somehow came to my attention.
Just little thing - I would change the pre delay on the clap at the beginning. The mix as a whole is big and spacey and the echo on the clap makes the clap sound like it is in small room and that contras the rest of the mix. It somehow came to my attention.
J. Yuehan
New member
Hey Smashmello!
I like your track a lot, man, the indian/asian and celtic culture both are very appealing to me, and your music has both in its melodies. I enjoyed your drum samples too.
I'd say your track can either be seen in a positive or kinda-critic point of view by the same reason:
Positive: You have a lot of different melodies in there, but all of them are linked by similar timbres, synths and styles, which gives your music a lot of dynamism.
Kinda-critic: Exactly because your track does have a lot of different melodies (more specifically it does not plays the same chorus), it loses its identity.
Therefore, I'd say your track fits more into an epic movie soundtrack than into a summer hit or house clubs latest. If that's good or not, you decide. For me, it's an incredible music. Good job!
When you have the chance, please check it out here. Keep it up, pal!
I like your track a lot, man, the indian/asian and celtic culture both are very appealing to me, and your music has both in its melodies. I enjoyed your drum samples too.
I'd say your track can either be seen in a positive or kinda-critic point of view by the same reason:
Positive: You have a lot of different melodies in there, but all of them are linked by similar timbres, synths and styles, which gives your music a lot of dynamism.
Kinda-critic: Exactly because your track does have a lot of different melodies (more specifically it does not plays the same chorus), it loses its identity.
Therefore, I'd say your track fits more into an epic movie soundtrack than into a summer hit or house clubs latest. If that's good or not, you decide. For me, it's an incredible music. Good job!
When you have the chance, please check it out here. Keep it up, pal!
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crystalhill2012
New member
Ok honest feed:
I think it sounds really good and that you could easily shop it as a movie track.
The only think I have a issue with its its not genre specific. I couldnt really hear what you was targeting genre wise. It was just a beat.
I didnt hear production errors it was very clean and good. Im just concerned with the point you were trying to make with the beat. You should hear your point in you r music.
Other tan that. Good stuff...
I think it sounds really good and that you could easily shop it as a movie track.
The only think I have a issue with its its not genre specific. I couldnt really hear what you was targeting genre wise. It was just a beat.
I didnt hear production errors it was very clean and good. Im just concerned with the point you were trying to make with the beat. You should hear your point in you r music.
Other tan that. Good stuff...
Yungspazz
New member
I like the breakdowns, mix good too. this was a dope listen!
Feedback? https://www.futureproducers.com/for...chael-milner-x-mellow-dramatic-ep-f4f-483088/
Feedback? https://www.futureproducers.com/for...chael-milner-x-mellow-dramatic-ep-f4f-483088/
Smashmello
New member
thank you all for the feedback! I already guessed that all the different melodies aren't for everyone 
and the clap in the beginning is also a really good point!
and the clap in the beginning is also a really good point!This was a pretty cool beat, but like others have said, it genre-wise it's uncertain (that's not really a negative btw).
Props tho, I liked the breakdowns a lot.
Feedme back here
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ance/[f4f]-chill-track-[unsure-genre]-485494/
Props tho, I liked the breakdowns a lot.
Feedme back here
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ance/[f4f]-chill-track-[unsure-genre]-485494/
PRPS
aka Joey Jeff Productions
nice breakdowns...vocals are cool too. shit gets wild at 2:35 in
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check out my new beat: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...plays-like-my-other-beat-485106/#post49833846
any constructive criticism is much appreciated
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check out my new beat: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...plays-like-my-other-beat-485106/#post49833846
any constructive criticism is much appreciated
LostEnergyRecords
New member
good mix as said previously all the different melodies make the track go off the road per say but apart from that really nice keep it up!!