Is this any good.

Like the melody man! Hmmm, maybe the snare is a little too loud during the build up, but it's late now so my ears are playing tricks on me now. Keep it up dude!
 
Hey Fulloctave88,

yes this is definitely good!! I'm really enjoying this beat, the melody is cool too!! Would love to hear the bass synth at the beginning without the kick for just like 2 bars, and then have the bass just dropping in :berzerk:

Have fun finishing this track!!
♢Artless Venture♢
 
I like the direction sounds like it was going to move into some dark tech house. I would love to hear more dark atmospheres in the introduction of the track to give it that edgy vibe. Also maybe vary your bass rhythm more at certain parts to avoid the repetitiveness. Either way excited to hear the end product! Keep us posted
 
overall its realy nice, i liked it.
1. i think a snare drum is to agressive, in my opinion it should be higher and quicker.
2. after the drop, when there is no drums just synth, i think the woosh(white noise raising) should be longer and built up more slowly.
3. in my opinion it will be nicer if the second synth in the later part not just come in from nowhere, to make some connection part to let it in.

but still i liked it a lot, i looking forward to see how it continues. i think it can be invloved even more but its a really cool start :)


i would like if you can give me a feedback about my new track
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-trance-house-dance/new-nudisco-track-508054/
 
Sounds really good, I think after the synth melody's first bar, it would sound cool if you had the bass synth play along with the melody and have it build up to the drums instead of reintroducing the drums right away. Like I said, it sounds great, I just suggest you play around with the arrangement a little bit :)

I'm actually looking for some feedback too, I'd like your opinion on my new track, could always use a second opinion

https://soundcloud.com/by-tor-1/black-w1d0w
 
Hi there fulloctave88,

I like your melody! I think you could use it in a more intense harmonic progression, creating a bigger build up. I quickly made an example, using your melody; see this soundcloud page:

https://soundcloud.com/the_music_channel/for-fulloctave88
(I am sorry about the lower volume.)

Using harmonics like that also allows you to change your base notes (create a second melody in the bottom).
I am curious about your end result.
 
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The_Music_Channel said:
Hi there fulloctave88,

I like your melody! I think you could use it in a more intense harmonic progression, creating a bigger build up. I quickly made an example, using your melody; see this soundcloud page:

https://soundcloud.com/the_music_channel/for-fulloctave88
(I am sorry about the lower volume.)

Using harmonics like that also allows you to change your base notes (create a second melody in the bottom).
I am curious about your end result.
Click to expand...

Thanks for your input and the time taken to do this for me its much appreciated .:cheers:
 
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