Sound design seems really good. Good job creating space and an ambience with your sounds for an interesting intro. Don't really like your arrangement of the drop. You have a lot of lows on those synths that come in right before the drums and it takes a way from the punch. Try slowly filtering out the lows and bringing them back in after the drums. I also would start with the drums right after you taper off there at about 1:00 . Once your drums come in it's not very driving, I would add more percussion. Simple off-beat hi hat would help a lot here.
It's a solid idea. Think hard on a couple other complementary elements and start expanding on this and come up with a full length track. Keeping in mind how to add movement and interest throughout with your various instruments. You don't need 80 elements make a full track. Keep it simple at first.
Lemme know what you think about this if you have time.
