46 working hours later. (tropical house)

[jawal]

Made my first tropical house track. Im not sure about the transitions but im satisfied with the layered leads. All feedback is appreciated!
Made the video with FL Studios zgame visualiser and some copyright free videos i found online.
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[Dr Spaceman]

I think it's not bad
But for me personally speaking i don't like how the leads are haering when you play the vocal that's sound i little weird for me personally speaking

Gr Nis

 

[KinglySafe]

sounds good where did you get the vocals from?

 

[jawal]

Vandalism has some awesome vocals and other stuff
Vocals - Samples

 

[jawal]

I think it's not bad
But for me personally speaking i don't like how the leads are haering when you play the vocal that's sound i little weird for me personally speaking

Gr Nis

ye i tried with another simpler melody but didnt work out and then i decided i would work on it later which i then forgot

 

[Sean8877]

I enjoyed this, got me in the mood for the summer time and going to the beach. Nice vocals like someone else said. I like the dynamics between the quiet and upbeat sections. Nice vocal effects also.

 

[the mow]

Hey jawal, smooth and solid mix. The intro/verse part seems a bit long, the first drop could come sooner and have more of an impact. The vocals sound a bit thin when there's not much in the background maybe? Overall, really nice and summery

 

[Patrick Cruz]

loved the intro to the was great. the only thing i could say was that the vocals got a bit thin as the track progressed. Great job though