On Deck... That CHICAGO FIRE. SAMPLE MAGIC AS ALWAYS ALL FEEDBACK RETURNED!

[DJ i.c.e.]

http://myspace.com/smokedoutinstrumentals
"On Deck"

As always flippin that fire, let me know what u think of this one. Peep my vids if you like what you hear, both of them are in my about me. Add me as a friend if you'd like, and do NOT FORGET TO DROP YOUR LINKS IN THIS THREAD SO I CAN RETURN THE FEED! Cool thanks!


-Smokey Chuck

 

[soggue]

dope flip, ya know how to flip it !

keep it up, that's flavor

 

[Relevent Muzik]

I wasnt really feeling the chicago track. idk why it just wasnt my steeze. I didnt like the sample... it got repetitive and i lost intrest.

That on deck track is hot. Sounds like something Royce Da 5'9 would rap on. I can picture that or some Dipset maybe... Hot track. Ya did ya thang on that joint...

https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=220819

 

[djdivined]

Chicago: Dope flip on the sample. did get repetitive though.

The Come Down: nice , good all round joint. wipped it righ.

Hip Hop Renaissance: I liked certain parts of the layering but not others.

On Deck: Ya like The Come Down it's ill. way to drop flames.

hit me back with some feed.
https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=221061

 

[d.C.]

Diggin' the track, lotsa energy, real nice vibe...you flipped the sample real nice...

 

[theusualsuspects]

the come down is the best track of the bunch, feeling that one. other than that "on deck" sounds a little repititive but it would work with someone rapping over it. "hip hop renaissance" has a nice bounce but i thought the drums could be a little better but thats me being picky. keep up the good work

ttyl peace

 

[xicano]

dope track. this track does sound a little to dizzy would sound dope with an mc. i would seperate the chops a little more my opion, not really a critic.but hit me up peace.https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=220530

 

[Cap'n Crunk]

sample was illy but a little too repetitive. maybe a little too much chopping?
hit me uppppzord
https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?p=47714384

 

[EsemJayes]

really nice drums and hi hats and ****...i like the vibe too and the samples...nothing really else to say...keep it up

 

[therealaxis]

I Think Its Hot But Damn Its Alot Of Choppin Mayby You Can Change It Up Every 4 To 8 Bars With Out So Much

 

[GLBeats]

this beat is hot
sometimes it sounds too repetitive & the kick sounds distorted
needs different chops

check out https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=222222

 

[DJ_ARCH]

you pretty good, but just based off what i heard, u dont really sound to different from any other producer that samples. its just constructive criticism.

Im 17 too. check out my thread https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=222841
or go to http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=449248. give me some feedback

 

[KriTiKul]

you pretty good, but just based off what i heard, u dont really sound to different from any other producer that samples. its just constructive criticism.

Im 17 too. check out my thread https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=222841
or go to http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=449248. give me some feedback

I agree. With all respect fam, you're style is a bit bland; nothing that really set's it apart. The drum sequence is very ordinary. Your chops are decent, but overdone. Your kicks are too loud (which doesn't compensate for thickness), and the melody is a bit plain. You have tremendous potential, but you need to strive to be a bit more original. If you have to, literally copy the drum sequence off of a well-known producer's beat if you have to, just to get the feel for what it should sound like. According to your style, you might wanna use producers like DJ Premier, Pete Rock, J Dilla, 9th Wonder, etc. Not claiming to be the best producer or the most original, but trying to help you out.