how does this mix sound to you?

[DWreck ThE VirUS]

i spent some time trying to get it decent...tell me if it sounds ok or if i could change anything to make it sound better...any critisism or suggestiuons would be appreciated...its called lay ya head down

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=788018&content=music

 

[r2danov]

Turn down snares and hi hats piano is kinda get buried too, strings too loud

 

[Tim20]

Good start. I would suggest adding just a slight hint of the reverb you used on the other instruments to the drums. The drums sound sterile for lack of a better word, because they are so dry compared to the other parts.

Also, I would try making some arrpegiated piano parts to go along with the other piano, because all of the instruments are too stacatto. i.e. very short note lengths.

Good luck

 

[DWreck ThE VirUS]

thanks for the help like i said i have no monitors..just headphones and comp speakers...i try to compare with proffesional tracks and run the level as close as possible..wish i had more recources