nice man. try using an arrangement, like 16 bar verse 8 bar chorus 16 bar verse 8 bar chorus 16 bar middle break 16 bar chorus. next keep the chorus the most busy, and the verses less involved as to lead to the chorus, next try layering your sounds. also frequency range is big to get that full sound. try to use instruments that come from the entire frequency range 20 hz to 20,000 hz . vote for my remix down below if you like. peace