Wonky Loop, Help and Feedback apreciated.

[Oriax]

Hey there!

So this is a loop for a wonky beat i'm trying to complete. All the elements of the track are in this loop, what I need is a little advice on how i should structure the beat and what to add or remove. Any feedback and help is greatly appreciated.




EDIT: Alright i just finished the track. First track ever, no mixing or mastering.

 

[RavenPro]

On the intro you should have the kick and snare pattern playing along with the piano, then have the shakers slowly fade in and afterwards the synths come in. That's how i would do it, nice beat.

 

[quike]

RavenPro - gave you good advice, make it longer though. I usually add things every 4th/ 8th bar

 

[KronicBeatz]

This beat is weird...but I like it lol...idk what a wonky beat is but I like the bass u used, it must be a relative of dubstep type of beat? The mix was a little odd, you might want to play around with what to bring in and what to take out a little bit more. Nice beat.

Check me out: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ive-feedback/new-r-b-beat-so-true-f4f-464420/

 

[RavenPro]

It's sounding hella dope man, congratz.

 

[SizzlinKola]

Feel like you're missing hi-hats. Could vary the drum pattern a little more. The wonky here is very present and I like where you're going with this!

 

[itsatrap]

This sounds dark and nice, like dubstep. Nice how you play with the snares. I totally agree with Raven.

 

[blues man]

Returning the feed!

I enjoy peoples first tracks ever made. I think this is great cus your exploring your own style and sounds like you got real weird with the beat haha. I love those wobbles! Im listening on some headphones, but I feel like those wobbles could use a touch of a low sub bass underneath! Keep it up!

 

[filmgirls01]

Feel like you're missing hi-hats. Could vary the drum pattern a little more.

I agreee with him

 

[SEESHAAproductions]

Sounds interesting! Can definitely hear it with a rap part! Happy new year!