this is nice man. really love the progression you made and the subtleness of the drums really fits the beat. i just feel there should be a switch in melody for a hook or smt like tht to keep it for being too repetitive but i dont think it will mater if there was an emcee on this. overall great job man keep it up
That bass for me seemed a tiny bit loud and overpowering to the main piano melody. But other than that great tune to sit down and listen with a cup of tea tbh
nice but put some strings in it. strings put more emotion in songs and also bring up the kick a lil bit. overall i like it. this is the type of music i love to make. keep doing ya thing brotha
The piano has a somber, afternoon feel. I think it does however get too repetitive here. I think the engineering on the piano is a little too prominent. The drums are crisp, though some variation would be nice on this. This has potential. Try listening to Nujabes Keep it going.
Good stuff man, I like that piano progression you have going on. It'll definitely sound good with the right emcee. I would add some drum variation. Maybe a drum break or roll every 8 bars. Try also adding another instrument or two. If you layered this with some rhodes chords every now and again it could add some flavor. Maybe a synth. You have the start of a good track in the making.