Mixing Song Feedbacks

[Filippo Piggici]

Hi everyone,
I am new in this Forum, It is the first thread for me.
I would like to do my best to help people with opinions and feedbacks and to be helped in th same way would be great for me. I have just some doubts about this song of mine. If anyone has even the littlest opinion about the song and Mixing feedbacks I would appreciate it very much. There is nothing on the master. This is a premaster version.
Thanks everyone

https://soundcloud.com/deeparture-34469455/mix-feedback/s-KG8Bw

 

[mansarius]

Hi, I'm new here aswell, but I can give you feedback based on my opinion. I like the first part of the song, and the middle part. This is where you have a nice buildup, and everything is mixed pretty good. Then from 1 min, where the drop is, I feel like there is too much going on, or at least some melodies or rythms that doesn't fit together, and that the lead melody is a bit messy. Other than that, the individual sounds are quite clean, and there is potential, so keep on going!

 

[Filippo Piggici]

Thanks very much for the feedbacks!! What do you mean about the lead melody is a bit messy? Ah and some opinion about the bass frequencies, Did you find any problem? Thanks!!