Ima 16 yrs old Rapper - feddback searched - thanks guys

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MannyDaKid

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Hey ima young 16 yrs old rapper from germany and i wanted to ask if you could check out a few songs i did.
i think feedback is a great opportunity to improve my work..
so pls tell me what i could do better but pls dont hate

thanks guys

here are 2 songs:
 
I have no idea what your saying ha but I will say this, your flow sounds a little inconstant. When it comes to rhyming it has a lot to do with the pauses, delivery, the way your flow rides over the beat. Now that being said theirs a lot of potential! Your only 16 you have a lot have room to grow! Keep at it bro!!
 
Chrisgalactic said:
I have no idea what your saying ha but I will say this, your flow sounds a little inconstant. When it comes to rhyming it has a lot to do with the pauses, delivery, the way your flow rides over the beat. Now that being said theirs a lot of potential! Your only 16 you have a lot have room to grow! Keep at it bro!!
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Thx
So do you mean that i should pay attention in emphasize words and where i make pauses?
 
Yes! Listen to some MC's and how they use delivery on beats. Check Evidence from Dilated Peoples, honestly flow is everything then content.
 
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