Hi, I checked your track and I think that in the intro I would add either more notes (duplicates) or layers of piano (blend two or more piano instruments) to make the piano sound richer as well as expand the arrangement in the verses with some plucked melody in higher intervals (for example two octaves higher than the 'sad' piano). Last idea is to add some FX/ FX sounds (I think for example some gunshots or muting the track for a second) to make the arrangement less repetitive. On the other hand I liked the hi-hat part, it is really nice work.
If you'd like feel free to check my new tracks below and let me know what do you think:
