Follow Up To My Previous Post (Valentines Day Drop)

[GoldspinkProductions]

Ight so i have added some new sounds into this beat that im working on. Tell me what you think. honest feedback. Cheers


https://soundcloud.com/goldspinkproductions/valentines-day-drop-more-has

 

[JGrisly]

The drums are still kind of lack luster.
The rhythm is really struggling imo. Even just putting a closed hi hat on the eighth notes would help.
Also that bass line is almost identical to "stand by me".
You can do better

 

[GoldspinkProductions]

Thanks for the back. yeah listening back to it has made me realize alot of work is still needed to be done. thanks for being honest though

 

[BroHammadAli]

Sounds like some J. Hud. Has mad potential. Just get the mix right.

 

[GoldspinkProductions]

Thanks man. Yeah ill be working hard on this. thanks for feedback

 

[Cariffo]

Not bad at all I like it...but (maybe it's only me) i think the snares are a little too loud

 

[GoldspinkProductions]

Thanks for the feedback. I got told i should make the drums more simple so ill be changing the drums and fixing the loudness of the snares. Thanks. glad you like it

 

[FoundationMG]

The piano is a good foundation but def needs more musical elements, I think a more intricate baseline, more uptempo drum pattern.. If you keep at it I think you can def do something with this that turns out good. Check mines-
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ive-feedback/new-user-trap-bass-crunk-467078/

 

[GoldspinkProductions]

Thanks man for the feeback