video is good for being your first.. Not bad at all... the song is cool, the low beat puts alot of focus on your lyrics, witch I thought you was spitting pretty dope!
ima thumbs up your video!
You dont look confident in front of the camera. The lyrics aren't bad but the delivery has to be stronger, get a little animated show that your extremely comfortable and passionate, you just need to sounds Bigger. Concepts there just gotta deliver it. Just my feedback. Hit me when you can - https://www.futureproducers.com/for...loaded-soundclick-ayodlo-460137/#post49711624