Chinese victory (f4f)

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Jsouley233

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Hey,

I've been working on this track for quite awhile now, and I am almost done. I could definitely use some feedback and opinions.
I tried doing something unique and spend probably way too long focusing on the sound design (lol).

But anyways! Gimme dat constructive criticism :-)




PS: (As stated above, I am not 100% done with the track, there are still some minor mistakes.)
It's a straight up 85BPM trap joint btw.
 
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the mix is real good, maybe some short fx here and there would add some dynamics. maybe change the notes a little bit? add some space between them, add a pad behind the main sound you have. these are just changes i would add for personal preference, try them on your track and see if they suit your style or not :)

awesome Community samples tho!

Feed me back please?:)
https://soundcloud.com/akirakunr/lose-yourself-to-dance
 
akirakunr said:
the mix is real good, maybe some short fx here and there would add some dynamics. maybe change the notes a little bit? add some space between them, add a pad behind the main sound you have. these are just changes i would add for personal preference, try them on your track and see if they suit your style or not :)

awesome Community samples tho!



Feed me back please?:)
https://soundcloud.com/akirakunr/lose-yourself-to-dance
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First of all thanks for your feedback. I will look at my work!

Your track on the other hand, it's actually really good man! I REALLY like the flow you have. I think you could use some vocal samples of the song itself. A little trap chop in it wouldn't do bad!

micasaweapon said:
Hey what genre is this supposed to be?

I think the melody is great and the beat overall is really good. I just think that the sound choice isn't that great. I know it's supposed to be Asian influenced but the synth you used just wasn't for me.


Check out my sound please!
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ive-feedback/new-song-celebration-f4f-471591/
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Thanks man! It's funny, because I wasn't so sure about the synth either haha! I'll definitely work on it.

I replied to your thread! Nice song man.
(Btw I tried combining two genres which are trap and typical cultural chinese melodies)
 
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