Magestic- I like like that begining melody, that instrument that sound a little out of tune really gives it a nice fell. and I like that break at 49, it doesn't seem off to me it gives it a nice break, only thing I could suggest would have your snare hit harder, but thats more of a personal preference. Good stuff man!
Dubb- I like the sounds you used, nice funk vibe. The latin percussion in the background really adds to it. The only thing I would suggest that since its more of a funk kinda of beat, you should try to make the drums more realistically, instead of the 808 kinda feel. maybe some realistic shakers and a ride cymbal, with some good drums make it sound more like a drum break. Good job man!
My Vote- Magestic
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