PhillipDrummond:
All I can say is Diff'rent Strokes, dog... Diff'rent Strokes
The new beat you're pushing is definitely better than that first joint.
But, I think the DJ in you is influencing your music production a little too much.
Your beats have some goods elements, but they sound more like you're mixing records in a dance club than something an emcee would spit to.
I am a little curious as to why you seem so anxious to battle someone.
I mean, you can always just post some beats and ask people for feedback.
This site is a tremendous resource, and it has far more to offer than beat battles.
So, relax... Try to soak up some of the energy.
If your ish is hot, it'll come to the light.