way way off my brother. the start was alright becuase it had a feel of an offbeat riddim but after that 0:05 mark it went all over the place.

im sounding like a derkead i know but the samples and drums have to work with each other. you have a drum beat that is doing a normal beat, fine thats cool but the chops are just placed at random there is no beat to it. what are you actually listenign to when you have it on your headphones?

i wanna know seriously becuase in every beat you made you have a good sense for chops, but as soon as you put it to a drum beat wahay all over the place.maybe you need to time stretch the samples so that they run smooth with the drum track i think. learn abit of theory aswelll the time sig is aLLLL over the place as well. 3/4 4/4 5/6 ?!??!??!

bless man good luck on the next one.