What's Good Jordan
I'm new to this web forum thing. I'm feeling your beat the synths and drums are sick. " I Reall like the shakers under the beat, nice touch that really gives the beat sexiness. I do think that medlody of the synths sounds a bit like the "Whatever you like" record by Nicole Syzcheniger and Produced by: Polow da Don. But other than that the Record is banging have you had any writers create a concept for the track?
What's Good Hype
I like your Instrumental also. Your synth game is nice I really like the consistency of the pianos under the sythesizer. The beat is basic, I thought that if you added some additional tom toms and other percusion elements it would take it to another level. I beleive that the Instrumental as a whole lacks Variation. The beat does not shift the synths remain the same throughout the whole track. I think that if you reconstructed the track and add additional elements of variation that it would definetly stand out.
My verdict of the winner is:
"Jordan"
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