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Jordan Cormier


My track "Bang" - http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...d=6958549&q=hi

vs

HYPE [S-GANG]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...?bandID=766899

It's called FP October Beat Battle


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Voting ends on Sunday Oct 14 at 8pm Pacific Time Zone

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10-10-2008

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Jordan, I am feeling tis joint it's a club banger. You were selective with your synths and you could have easily overdone it there so you killed it in that department. The clap is kind of weak, but your changes are dope and the clap in the chorus is fire. It sounds doubled up or sharper or something. Hype, you don't waste anytime hittin them in the head, that arpeggio synth keeps you noddin. This is a banger too. And that clap is slappin. You don't have as many changes as Jordan but the mix is a little bit nicer. all things being equal, I have to give it to Hype based on the better mix. Nice work fam.

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10-10-2008

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What's Good Jordan

I'm new to this web forum thing. I'm feeling your beat the synths and drums are sick. " I Reall like the shakers under the beat, nice touch that really gives the beat sexiness. I do think that medlody of the synths sounds a bit like the "Whatever you like" record by Nicole Syzcheniger and Produced by: Polow da Don. But other than that the Record is banging have you had any writers create a concept for the track?

What's Good Hype

I like your Instrumental also. Your synth game is nice I really like the consistency of the pianos under the sythesizer. The beat is basic, I thought that if you added some additional tom toms and other percusion elements it would take it to another level. I beleive that the Instrumental as a whole lacks Variation. The beat does not shift the synths remain the same throughout the whole track. I think that if you reconstructed the track and add additional elements of variation that it would definetly stand out.

My verdict of the winner is: "Jordan"

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10-10-2008

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HITWRITER, make sure you vote on the TheLetterL vs Direktion battle.

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10-10-2008

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No doubt Letter make sure you check out and feed back the new record INVIT go to Hitwriter.net

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10-10-2008

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I have to go w/ Jordan,. Lov the sounds and kept me noddin, catchy.
Hype urs felt like a good club joint, but it had me waitn 4 the hook, u kno everyone love the hook...no one really care about the verse in club joints.


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10-10-2008

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Jordan Cormier Jordan Cormier is offline
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Preciate the love so far. Keep it coming!
10-11-2008

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Baka EditZ Baka EditZ is offline
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my vote goes to: Jordan Cormier

nice melo!
10-12-2008

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I vote Jordan
his sounds were more catchy, it had more changes and the melody or w/e sounded better

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10-12-2008

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Jordan Cormier Jordan Cormier is offline
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Whoooyeh! Good ****. Thanks for all the votes you guys.
10-13-2008
 

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