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Originally Posted by SamePageProductions
good flip - I woulda added a few more things in there layer-wise, but you have a great progression, and the vocal is seemless on the hook part. Hats were great, but wasn't really diggin the snare. I woulda have used the 2nd part of the vocal part tho, where she says how hard it is to be alone or something like that. woord. Good beat tho.
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Constructive criticism
...Thnks!!! Yeah I did try to add more around the melody...but went unsuccessful....Had a hard time trying to compress the kicks with the melody and fx and all...
And for the 2nd part it would have went but... she talk about love and the theme i was going for was about struggling and trying to make it so it wouldnt have meshed with it...feel me...
But thanks again for the feedback...i really appreaciated it!!!
